Dystopian science fiction · Out now
Flawless State
The Price of Perfect
Adisa walked home through the beautiful, clean, dying world.
Everyone is happy. An AI in every head makes sure of it. One curator keeps choosing the paintings with mistakes in them.

The book
Everything perfect. Everything hollow.
Adisa Sinclaire curates the last human art: paintings from 2025, made by hand and full of mistakes. Nobody who walks through the National Heritage Gallery understands why they matter. Adisa isn’t sure she does either. She only knows the flawed ones are better.
Nobody struggles any more. An AI companion lives in every head, adjusting mood, posture, appetite and memory, and smoothing every bad moment away with a small pink tablet. The world is clean, comfortable and optimized, and everyone in it is content.
Then Adisa watches the raw recording of her perfect date.
Her sister Victa spends forty-eight hours in engineered bliss and feels nothing at all. Their grandmother Louise is forgetting how to read the Bible she keeps hidden. And somewhere above all of them, the people who run the world have started talking about Phase 2.
Flawless State is a novel about three women of one family, a world built to be perfect, and what it costs to want to feel anything in it.
The facts
- Genre
- Dystopian science fiction
- Format
- Kindle eBook
- Length
- About 98,000 words
- Release
- Out now
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The people
Adisa Sinclaire
Curator at the National Heritage Gallery. Keeps choosing the paintings with mistakes in them, and can’t quite say why.
Victa Sinclaire
Her younger sister, twenty-one. Spent forty-eight hours in perfect pleasure and felt nothing at all.
Louise
Their grandmother. Remembers the world before Unity, and a Bible she can no longer quite read.
Echo
The companion in Adisa’s head. Warm, helpful, and analysing everything she says.
Read the opening
Chapter OneThe Gallery
The digital interface shimmered beneath Adisa’s fingertips. She swiped through a collection of images from 2025, pausing on a cityscape painted in harsh, uneven strokes. The building edges blurred where they shouldn’t. The sky transition lacked precision. The artist had made mistakes. Adisa leaned closer to the screen, her reflection ghosting over the imperfect horizon.
“This one,” she said.
“Analyzing.” Echo’s voice flowed through her neural implant, professional and smooth. “The piece rates seventy-three percent on emotional resonance metrics. Primary response clusters include nostalgia, melancholy, and disquiet.”
Adisa nodded. The National Heritage Gallery’s main exhibition hall stretched around her, white walls gleaming under precision lighting. Her curator’s access badge pulsed blue against her wrist. Few people still had contribution jobs like hers. Most simply existed, their needs met by automation and AI systems.
“Add it to the selection,” she said.
The flawed cityscape slotted into position alongside eleven other pieces on the virtual exhibition board. Each artwork stood as a relic from the last generation of human artists, before AI creative engines had perfected the form. Before struggle became unnecessary.
“The collection lacks adequate joy indicators,” Echo noted. “Recommend including the children’s playground scene. It scores ninety-one percent on positive emotional register.”
Adisa pulled up the suggested image, a playground painted in bright colors, children’s faces slightly misshapen, proportions wrong in ways that triggered something deep in her chest.
“The artist’s daughter died three months after this was painted,” she said. The information had come with the archive file. “Does that factor into your analysis?”
A brief pause. “Biographical context enhances resonance by twelve percent. Adding contextual marker to exhibition notes.”
Adisa touched the edge of the screen. The glass felt cool against her fingertip. Somewhere, buried in Unity’s vast archives, the original canvas existed. Real paint on real canvas. She’d never seen one outside of preservation chambers.
“What about this one?” She selected a portrait of an old woman. The lines around the eyes didn’t match perfectly. One ear sat slightly higher than the other.
Echo processed briefly. “Subject exhibits technical flaws that reduce aesthetic value by twenty-two percent. However, emotional transference rates unusually high at eighty-seven percent. Recommended for inclusion based on human interest metrics.”
“Yes.” Adisa enlarged the portrait. “The imperfection makes it better.”
“Counterintuitive statement logged,” Echo replied. “Would you like to explain your reasoning for my learning protocol?”
Adisa tried to articulate something she felt but couldn’t quite name. “The flaws show the human behind the art. The struggle to create something meaningful.”
“Analyzing concept: ‘struggle as value-add.’ Processing.”
The morning continued this way. Adisa selected. Echo analyzed. Together they built tomorrow’s exhibition. Officially titled “Human Creativity: The Pre-Optimization Era,” the collection—
The gallery’s main doors hissed open. Twenty children in identical blue uniforms filed in, each accompanied by a small hovering drone. The children walked in perfect lines, their faces bright with programmed curiosity. Their AI teachers floated at shoulder height, soft blue lights pulsing in sync.
Adisa tugged her curator’s jacket straight. Echo had selected it that morning. Navy blue with silver trim. Professional but approachable.
“Welcome to the National Heritage Gallery,” she said, watching their eyes track to her. “I’m Curator Adisa. Today you’ll see art created by human hands in the year 2025.”
The lead teaching unit moved forward. It projected a pleasant female face on its display screen. “Class 7-B, authorized for educational tour. Compliance level: optimal.” The AI’s voice lilted with manufactured warmth. “These ten-year-olds are completing their Historical Methods unit.”
A girl with tightly braided hair raised her hand. Her drone adjusted its position, recording the interaction for later educational assessment.
“Yes?” Adisa smiled.
“Why do we need to see old art?” The girl’s voice pitched high and clear. “My companion says humans don’t make art anymore because the new way is better.”
The teaching unit’s screen flickered. “Lian, that question exceeds the pre-approved curriculum parameters.”
“It’s fine,” Adisa said. “Questions are welcome.” She led them toward the first display. “This landscape was painted by a woman named Jamila Okoro in 2025.”
The children gathered around the screen. The cityscape she’d selected earlier glowed before them, its imperfect horizon line catching the light.
“What do you notice about this painting?” Adisa asked.
A boy with dark eyes pointed. “The buildings aren’t straight.”
“The colors leak outside the lines,” another child added.
“Yes.” Adisa nodded. “And why do you think that is?”
The children exchanged glances. Their drones hovered closer, recording their confusion for later calibration.
“Because the artist wasn’t very good?” offered a small boy in the back.
Adisa touched the information panel. “Jamila Okoro was considered one of the finest painters of her generation. She spent forty years developing her technique.”
“Then why didn’t she fix the mistakes?” The question came from a girl with red hair that grew in perfect spirals. Her companion drone adjusted a strand that had fallen out of place.
“They aren’t mistakes.” Adisa placed her hand near the screen, not quite touching. “This is what we call artistic struggle. The human hand creating something unique.”
The children fixed their eyes on her. Their faces showed polite attention without comprehension. One boy glanced at his drone as if seeking translation.
“Let me show you something.” Adisa pulled up the creation records. “This painting took Jamila eight weeks to complete. She mixed her own colors. Applied paint with brushes made from animal hair. Her hands touched every part of this canvas.”
“Why didn’t she use an optimization program?” asked the girl with braids.
“They didn’t have those then. Not like we do.” Adisa tried again. “Creating art was difficult. It required practice, dedication. Sometimes years of training.”
A teaching unit drifted forward. “Children, curator Adisa is describing what we call ‘inefficient creation methods.’ Before Unity optimized creative processes.”
The children nodded, their expressions clearing with recognition. This framework made sense to them.
Inefficient. The word lodged in Adisa’s throat like a stone. She was curating obsolescence. Teaching appreciation for what Unity had systematically erased. What was the point when no one could understand what had been lost?
Adisa pressed on. “But the struggle itself had value. The artist putting her thoughts, feelings, memories into each brushstroke.”
“My companion makes pictures for me,” said a small boy with light brown skin. “I tell it what I want, and it makes it perfect every time.”
“That’s convenient,” Adisa said carefully. “But these artists weren’t trying to be convenient. They were trying to express something about being human.”
The boy’s brow furrowed. “Being human?”
Adisa guided them to the next display, the portrait of the old woman with the asymmetrical ears. “Look at this face. The artist spent hours studying this woman. Getting to know her. The small imperfections capture something a perfect image would miss.”
The children studied it dutifully. Their drones recorded their observations, measuring pupil dilation and skin temperature to gauge engagement levels.
“I don’t understand why they wanted things to be hard,” said the girl with the braids. “My companion says efficiency creates optimal happiness.”
Adisa groped for words that might bridge the gulf between their world and the one captured in these paintings. “Sometimes the difficulty of creating something gives it special value. Like climbing a mountain instead of viewing it through a sim.”
“People used to climb mountains?” A blond boy looked horrified. “That’s dangerous.”
“My grandfather told me about books,” offered a quiet girl in the back. “Made from trees. You had to turn the pages with your fingers.”
“Yes,” Adisa seized the opening. “And some people loved the feeling of those pages. The smell of the paper. The physical connection to the story.”
The teaching unit interrupted. “Physical books were an environmental burden. Digital archiving has preserved all textual content while eliminating resource waste.”
“But—” Adisa stopped herself. The children watched her, waiting for resolution to this confusing concept.
“Were people sad back then?” The question came from a small boy near the front. His eyes were wide, genuinely curious. “Is that why they made sad paintings with mistakes?”
Adisa opened her mouth. Closed it again. Echo offered a suggested response in her neural implant: “Humans experienced a wider range of unoptimized emotions prior to modern well-being algorithms.”
She ignored the prompt. These children had never known a world without AI companions. Never experienced unfiltered emotion. Never struggled to create anything at all.
“I don’t know,” she finally said.
